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Review:PitchBlue says:
The only reason why I'm restraining myself from capse-locking all the way is that I want to leave it for when Remus and Marianne finally get together (I think that would be appropriate). But otherwise, this review would be totally in caps. I mean, AAAH MARIANNE, WHAT HAS HAPPENED? (there, just a bit in caps) I FEEL SO SAD AND SORRY FOR HER AND I JUST AAAH. But it's written so brilliantly. Beneath all the 'whyyy, mariaaanne, whyyy'-layers I like it that you keep us waiting just a little bit longer. Somehow it wouldn't feel right if she had just forgiven him. I mean, from everything I've read about her she seems like a very proud person (in a good way). So it makes sense that she wouldn't just forgive him. But AAAH THEY'RE SO PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER.

I loved the little bickering between Sirius and Gemma, it makes their relationship very realistic! Sirius is so adorable when he's jealous. Awww.

And oh my custards, Peter has gone to the dark side! I guess they have sultry Slytherin girls instead of cookies now. It was absolutely brilliant, you've given his character so much depth. Really, standing ovation! You write sexy character very well by the way. I could imagine Luciana so vividly.

Now I'd just like to add a little squel for James and Lily. I mean, they're so cute!

Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Omg, you don't know how much I want Remus and Marianne to get together. That scene was so so painful to write ... but you're right, there's no way she would just forgive him. I mean, he DID run out of the bookshop and then avoid her for like a month. And take another girl to the Ball who looks exactly like her. So she has every reason to be angry at him ... and I hope I made the point clear that she's mad at him for his behavior and not his illness. She still doesn't know about his lycanthropy so he's got a lot more work to do before he can win her over. And there are a couple more connections I want to make before they get together. But don't fret, you're going to be a happy remus/marianne shipper during the next big 4 person chapter with the girls :D

Ha, glad you think Sirius is adorable when he's jealous. Only problem is that Gemma might not agree with you ;)

As for Peter ... Yeah, he's evil now. I know he isn't supposed to turn evil until after Hogwarts but I was like, ok, he needs a little bit more plot to make him interesting. Otherwise, no one would care about his POV. I admit, it was a little annoying to write his opening chapters but now I'm actually excited to write him >:D

I'm trying to make James and Lily as cute as I can. They have a pretty tragic ending so I want to give him as much love/trust as possible. If you're a Jily fan, I know the next chapter is probably going to make you squeal with joy, ha!

Thanks for the review, dear!!

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