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Review:Rintunes says:
That was an amazing start to your story. I have to say that I really enjoyed it. I love how Lily has those friends that she's really close to. It's good that you established their friendships early in the story so we can get to know even more about their personalities that if you had introduced Ellie and Zoe later in the story.

I thought Lily was especially relatable because she get so nervous around people besides the ones that she knows the best. Usually stories show Lily as a very strong, amazingly confident character that isn't very relatable because not a lot of girls have that much confidence. It's unrealistic that she shouldn't have any flaws, so I'm glad that you gave her some. It's awesome.

I didn't notice that many spelling or grammar errors, so that's a plus. I thought that the dialogue and the way that Lily narrated the story was very entertaining. The banter between Ellie and Zoe was really funny, too. I'm looking forward to your next chapter and I hope you update soon. Thanks for writing!

~Rintunes

Author's Response: Aww thank you, thats such a sweet review. I have literally just finished my second chapter now, and should be putting it in the queue. I usually read stories about a flawless Lily Evans as well, and just wanted to write about someone who had a life they were comfortable with, which wasn't always in the spotlight, but then they get sort of thrust into it. I'm definitely having fun. I also kind of wanted to incorporate the Snape thing in fifth year as the reason she is like this, as we didn't really see much about her after her fifth year. But again thanks for the review, and I hope you like the later chapters.
~F


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