Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:potterfan310 says:
First review on the final chappie

OHMYGOD!!! The feels, aww baby Ryan sounds just bloomin' gorgeous not to mention adorable.

James is such a perfect dad ♥ and Reese is a great mummy ♥.

Eight pounds, bless Reese. Glad it was her not me lol. Although I do know people who've had nine pound babies as well as eleven pound babies. Ouch.

Haha Lily being blunt, I don't suppose that's what you want to hear after giving birth but good on Reese for not taking it to heart.

Aww he was born on the third. Snap, me too. Yay another person born on the third!!!

The last part, where Reese is reminiscing all I could think of was the song 'Everything Has Changed' by Taylor Swift and Ed Sheeran ♥. It might have something to do with the fact I've been listening to it non-stop or the fact the words kind to fit what Reese is saying as well as her relationship with James and the mother/child bond with Ryan ♥ ♥ ♥

I cried, awww. I am emotionally unstable right now, I mean it's over. The end, finite, finished. ASDFGHJJKL FEELS!! No more Jarissa :'(

Ryan, James, Reese, Rose, Louis, Lionel... My list could go on I AM GOING TO MISS THEM AND THIS STORY SO, SO MUCH!

You are welcome! I LOVE this story so much and I am so glad you never gave up on it. THANK YOU for writing it!


Soph x ♥♥

P.s Sequel?? or maybe a one-shot with them sending Ryan off to Hogwarts or even Rose and Scorpius' wedding??

Author's Response: Yes you are the first reviewer on the final chapter! I'm glad! :D

All babies are gorgeous, but Ryan is adorable! :'D

hahaha yeah, eight pounds is pretty big! But in his defence, Reese ate a lot while pregnant and he was a late baby! :p

One of my friend's sister had a ten pound baby! She's absolutely tiny (like ~150cm and the build of a 12 year old) and she popped out this monstrous child! :p But her son is absolutely gorgeous! :'D

Lily is always going to be blunt. It's one of the many things I love about her! :p

haha he was always going to be on Al's birthday but originally I had his birthday on the second but somehow I accidentally wrote the third so... :p

I really like that song. Ed Sheeran's voice is just dfjojdcefdjk ♥

I can see the link though! But I wrote this chapter before I'd heard the song so it's just a coincidence. :p

Aw, no don't cry! *hands you a tissue*

I'm going to miss them as well, but it is a bit of a relief that I finally finished my first novel!

Also, about the sequel: the simple answer is no.

HOWEVER, I am THINKING of writing a spin off. I'm going to use certain characters which will not be divulged and Ryan, Reese and James will feature in it, but they probably won't play a main role. Although, I am pretty pressed for time (yay for school -.-) so it probably won't be written for a while.

But I've been thinking about it and I can say almost certainly there will be SOMETHING. Just not too sure what! :p

Anyway, thank you so so so so much for all your amazing reviews! They always put a smile on my face!

- Kayla. ♥

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 827
Submit Report: