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Review:Lululuna says:
Ah, you updated! :) I love the continuation from the first chapter, and the logical way in which Michael confronts womankind and romance. His thought processes are so funny, it's like... well she is crazy... but she is hot... ok, I'll do it! Definitely a rational thinking Ravenclaw, that one!

I thought the references to Draco and McLaggen were just hilarious. Poor Michael, being upstaged by those blonds! The little hint of the attractive Draco of Dramiones was great, not to mention Lav-Lav's stalking exploits when it comes to Krum!

In response to your AN, I think Michael as a womanizer works very well. It makes sense that he would get a big head after scoring Ginny and Cho. He reminds me of the next Lockhart, perhaps he's been studying up on his books? (Also, I wonder how Cho will react to the new relationship? Michael was originally her revenge tool on Harry, after all!)

Oh, and I have to mention Millicent, I loved the description of her and the wolf-whistle. My favourite line would have to be : "what she was doing was quite mild in comparison." I love how none of them even mention Voldy or the war: obviously romance is much more important! :)

Loved it, can't wait to see who you'll feature next! :)

Author's Response: Yay, you came back! I didn't scare you away the first time then:P

I'm so glad that you liked the continuation, intially they were going to be separate but I thought linking them together would be more fun! Haha, yeah even though he doesn't always act like it, it does show it there!

I'm so glad that you liked the hints about the blondes they were far too much fun to write! I was tempted to include a Dramione sub-plot for the fun but it wouldn't have fitted with the story that well :(

Writing people with big heads is so much fun, so I'm glad you thought it worked :) Haha, Cho's not going to be too happy :P

Pff, Voldy is like a rabbit compared to Lavender!

I'm so glad that you loved it and I hope you like the next one too! Thanks for this brilliant review!

-Kiana


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