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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here for your requested review as well as for the review tag (hope you don't mind me combining the two)!

This was surely an enjoyable chapter. I liked it a lot because we got to see some emotional reactions on Devlin's part. I liked the interaction with Remus as well, it was nicely written. I like how Harry's actions are more ruled by his emotions while Alex's by rational thoughts. It seems a nice touch, they balance each other out, and it is interesting to see which one Devlin connects to first. I liked how this chapter ended on an intriguing note - Devlin is going to do some planning hmm.

All in all, good work as always. The chapter was well-written, hardly any grammar problems, and nice job with keeping the characterisation consistent as well as bringing out the emotions. It flowed pretty smoothly too.

9/10
Cheers
AD
(AditiDraco95)

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