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Review:marauder5 says:
This was absolutely wonderful! Alice and Frank were great, and I love how you continued to include the situation in the outside world, and not just the sweet family moments! I've rarely read any stories about the Weasleys in this state of their lifes, for example Bill and Charlie as little kids! They're always grown up in the stories I've read, so it was really nice to see them like this!! Bill is being such a typical big brother, stealing the candy out of Charlie's hands, haha! Well, while his grown-up self would never do it, he was a little kid once too!

I felt a little bad for Arthur for having to deal with they boys on his own, and Molly being so tired and so very pregnant. It must have been tough, and they're just expecting child number 3... it will get worse...

You write kids very well! Many authors struggle with it, but I think yours are very believable, and I can easily see children in Bill's and Charlie's ages act and talk the way they do, so good job on that! And Charlie breathing fire - what a perfect first sign of magic!!

I'm absolutely loving this story, and I'll move on to the next one soon... :)

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