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Review:MadiMalfoy says:
Hey again! :)

First of all, another phenomenal chapter! This had so much in it that I was hoping would resolve, and most of it did! Rose and Albus finally got over their problems and learned some new things that weren't necessarily good but needed to be said. It's very very well-written and sounds just like they would, right down to the gestures. I think that because they were the same age and then got separated they would miss that daily contact they had as children even more and Rose felt replaced and etc etc. Their hurt was almost palpable in this chapter!

You really had the chance to develop Scorpius's character in this chapter and you didn't disappoint! You showed what everybody else thinks of him and I think that that wakes him up, that he needs to stop being so rude and selfish if he wants to help save everybody and be able to have Rose. You introduced a very complex side to Scorpius, and I'm excited to see how you develop it further. Great job with this chapter! :) xx

Author's Response: This chapter is a bit of a stonker for resolution of issues, yes. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing.

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