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Review:marauderfan says:
I want to know why she left the magical world! Who did she make a promise to? Aaaa!!! (Basically what I'm trying to say, rather incoherently, is that I really like the suspense here. I feel like it's going to be something surprising, but you keep just mentioning it offhand and dropping little references to it here and there and it's building up nicely.)

Dumbledore's discussion of Voldemort made me wonder how much Emmeline actually knows about the war. I mean she's been pretending to be a Muggle for a long time, so I feel like she would be a bit unaware of what's going on. I guess she'll pick up on it fast if she's in the Order!!

Another great chapter!

Author's Response: Ahaha, I'm hoping it will be surprising. You're making me want to consider some different, more interesting plots. XD

Yeah she's pretty out of the loop. People are going to be picking up on that... a lot. :P

Thank you!

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