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Review:academica says:
Shelby, I'm back :)

What a cute chapter--and I never thought I would say that about a Tobias/Eileen story, so there's that! I love how confident Eileen seems when juxtaposed against people like Tobias and poor Lorraine. Even having lost her parents, I can still perceive that she's loved and valued in her own way among her friends and in the community. Her finesse in interacting with both magical and non-magical folk is also rather impressive. I guess what I mean to say is that I still really love her and find her very relateable, so great job with that.

Eileen's beginning interactions with Tobias here were intriguing. I love that she's the one who seems to have the upper hand, whereas he seems very awkward. I get tired of stories where the male figure is overly romanticized and the female just falls haplessly at his feet, and I doubt your Eileen would be the type to fall so easily, so it all fits and seems very refreshing. That said, I'm interested to see how we will get to the relationship we're used to, with conflict and even Eileen seeming weak at times in the face of all that she has on her plate.

I'm not quite sure what to else to say except that I'm still hooked and really enjoy coming back to this story with each new chapter. I'm so excited to see what you have planned for us in chapter four!

-Amanda

Author's Response: Hi Amanda! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm just so over the moon!

Haha, I know. It's so weird to call something with Eileen and Tobias cute. You know my thoughts on Eileen and Tobias and how I believe that they had to have been very much in love before all that bad stuff. I really wanted to change people's thoughts on Eileen and Tobias and show them the slow progression into that part of their relationship.

Eileen's really great, isn't she? She's such a strong woman and so relateable, which is exactly what I want and what I always imagined her to be.

Thank you, thank you! I, too, loathe those stories where the female is weak and the man is perfect. I pretty much can't stand it. It's not realistic and it's a bit ridiculous, to be honest. It is going to take a long time for them to get to the conflict in the relationship. They are definitely going to fall deeply in love so that we can see them fall apart.

I'm so stoked that you're hooked! You're one of my biggest fans/supporters/reviewers and it makes me so ridiculously happy! Thank you so much for the amazing review - I can't wait to see what you think of chapter four!

Thank you! ♥


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