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Review:BellaFan202 says:
Hello! Got to this pretty quickly, if I may say so. :P

This was really good, I really enjoyed the insight into Regulus's decision to join to Death Eaters. It was especially interesting to me that he did it, all the while intending to betray the Death Eaters, to be a spy from the very beginning.

The chapter itself was very good. There wasn't a whole lot of dialogue, which was good because there wasn't a whole lot of opportunity for dialogue. There was definitely a good amount of description. I think you did a really good job balancing the two.

I really liked how Regulus fully admitting how he looked up to Sirius and was disappointed in himself for being a Slytherin, and was also keeping track of how long Sirius had been gone. I feel like that maybe if Sirius had made more of an effort to be friendly with Regulus after he had been sorted, then Regulus wouldn't have had to end up leading the life he did. I feel like you did a really good job portraying that.

The only thing I wish there was more of is how Regulus really felt about joining the Death Eaters. I mean, it's obvious that he didn't like it and that it made him uncomfortable, but there was never any real description like about how Regulus felt about waiting for Severus to get back to him about joining. If that makes sense. I would have liked to see more emotion in this, is what I'm trying to say. :)

Be sure to request the next chapter! :)

~BellaFan202~

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I've added notes to add more of Regulus' feelings about joining the Death Eaters and how he felt while waiting for Snape to get back with him about joining the Death Eaters. Thank you!

Kreature and Sirius had such differing points of view about Regulus, he had to fall somewhere in between.

If Sirius had paid attention to his younger brother, perhaps they would have had a clue sooner about the Horcruxes, which would have changed the entire storyline. :)

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!


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