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Review:marauder5 says:
I'm so glad I found this story!

This was absolutely wonderful. The way you described the few hours after the birth of Bill was absolutely perfect, and I loved reading from Arthur's POV, as it's something that you don't see very often. I think his feelings seemed very realistic, and I was great to imagine young Molly and Arthur - I can actually see Molly as being mischief-making, even if it's far from her role in the books. It's just the way that she's always lecturing her children, especially Fred and George, that makes me think that she's speaking from experience ;) Also, I'm sure that the mischief is a heritage from the Prewett side (especially Molly's brothers, for some reason), and that the calmer side, like the one Bill has, comes from Arthur. Anyway, your portrayal of it was absolutely perfect.

I also really liked that you included Arthur's worry about the situation in England. It's very realistic, both that he would think about that after his son was born, and that the suspicion would start to rise among them, that they wouldn't know for sure what it was or what it would come to be. I really enjoyed that.

I loved what Arthur wrote to his family, especially the part about not letting Bilius get big-headed about Bill's name! And I wonder what he wrote to Dumbledore... I'm sure it has something to do with either the war or the Order of the Pheonix, but who knows, maybe I've got it all wrong.

Either way, I really, really enjoyed this, and I look forward to reading more of it!! :)

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