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Review:AlexFan says:
I don't think I've ever "heard" you swear before in your fanfiction. I was reading through this and I saw the f word and I did a double take because I was like "hold on, am I reading that right or have I really gotten that angry with Dom and Teddy that I'm inserting words."

Turns out, I'm not crazy.

Anyway, moving on. I really felt Victoire's pain. actually, it was starting to feel more like my pain and I was totally with Victoire on this. I am so glad that you made Victoire angry instead of just this pathetic whimpering girl who just accepted what happened. I've seen it happen far too often and it's refreshing to see that this fanfiction didn't have any of that.

You really know how to get your reader into a story and how to get your readers to feel what your main character is feeling. That's quite difficult to achieve and I congratulate you for that.

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

Yeah, well I swear a lot in real life so I try to tone it down in fanfiction but sometimes it comes through xP Haha you're too cute. And of course you're not crazy.

I am pleased you could feel Victoire's pain and you could connect with her. Indeed, I wanted Victoire to be strong and someone who doesn't take all the *insert swear word here* thrown at her.

I am glad you could get into the story and connect with my main character. Thanks a ton for your lovely comments!


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