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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
Hello, here for the Ravenclaw review battle!

Oh my goodness, I really loved reading this. I think you managed to capture Dominique's emotions so well, and the comparisons she made between her fourteen-year-old self and herself now just made the contrast all the more striking. She seems so weak now compared to the girl she used to be.

I love how she feels isn't just pain for herself, like most of these stories I've read, but also so much guilt for what she's doing to Victoire. All her emotions were so well written, I just wanted to cheer her up. But the angst works as well, I guess. :)

The end was so infuriating, but at the same time, it brought a feeling of closure to the story. Gah! Will she, won't she?

Anyway, all in all, a really great one-shot I loved reading.

Author's Response: Hello! Woo for Ravenclaw!

Oh wow, thank you so much! I'm so glad that the emotions came across well, and that you liked the contrast between Dominique at the different ages. (I had lots of fun writing that bit!)

I reckoned that someone in that situation would feel pretty awful about what they were doing, especially with it being her sister, so I'm glad that you founnd it realistic!
Haha yeah, I think it'd be good for someone to go cheer her up! :P

Yeah, I've had a lot of comments about the ending! It's great to hear that it brought some closure to the story, despite being so open.

Thank you very much for this review, and all you kind words! I'm so happy that you enjoyed reading! ♥

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