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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
-BookDinosaur- here with your requested review.

No, wait, what?! Terry?! Dead?! NO. Please, he's like my favourite character and you can't just kill him off and- gah.

Right, reviewing. I loved your descriptions of everything-Malfoy Manor, the Ball, the crowd of people. I could really see what was going on inside my head. I loved the description of the Manor in particular-it was really well written and easy to imagine, but there wasn't too much description.

I loved how Tor was thinking of Terry and missing him-it was so sweet.

So... Theo is marked now? Is he? That Christian character was shady, but I didn't expect Theo to get his mark so soon-I would have thought he'd have waited until after he finished school. But I'm worried for him now. I don't think he's a killer, and I don't want him to be evil, although Resistance does give us a small hint. Gah, I'm way too invested in your characters.

Yor cliffhanger was so hanger-y! I hope Tor didn't give anything away with her reaction. And please, please don't let Terry be dead. *sobs*

Anyway, a really good chapter that left me hanging. I need more, darn it!

Author's Response: Hello! :)

Ah, I'm sorry! :( Well, you'll just have to check out the next chapter and see what happens, it might not be exactly what you expect! :P

I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, and the descriptions of the ball! I'm glad the descriptions were just enough to paint a picture of the manor, which I enjoyed imagining as well. And yes, Terry and Tor are so cute together, aren't they?

I love Theo too, and I want the best for him! As for what happens to him, all (well, some) will be revealed in the next chapter, which is being written now! :)

I'm glad the cliffhanger worked, I wasn't sure how I did with that! And your reaction to the chapter is just what I hoped for, in an evil suspenseful kind of way! :D

Thank you for another wonderful review! :)


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