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Review:marauderfan says:
Toss the spitball through Professor Binns lol. I guess you can only get away with that in a class where the teacher doesn't know anyone's names well enough to give them detention! And she almost got away with it. I thought that was funny.

I also like seeing the way other Slytherins see Malfoy. In the books it came across that all Slytherins are mean because Malfoy was mean to Harry, but I like how you've showed that it's not all Slytherins that act that way - it's just Malfoy being awful (and not many of the other Slytherins even like him!)

The part with Tor and the mystery boy is interesting. I was a bit surprised they didn't say what house they were from, or their names, but I kind of liked that. Like it showed that the house isn't really that important for a friendship. And I know it's very easy to get into a long conversation with someone and then realise at the end that you never learned their name. I'm guessing he's a Ravenclaw or Hufflepuff, in Harry's year obviously. I'd feel badly for him if he were a Ravenclaw because of his fear of heights and living in a tower. And since he didn't mention that I'd say he's a Hufflepuff. Justin maybe? (after all he was reading Muggle books. Good choice on the books btw ;) )

(Also, I thought Tor's parents' owl had a different name several chapters ago.)

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Hello again! :) I know, poor Professor Binns! Tor was just having an awful day, so of course he had to pick that moment to become aware of what was going on!

I'm glad you like the Slytherins, and the portrayal of Malfoy. You're right, he's really a pretty awful guy at the moment, and there's a lot of rivalry and general dislike that occurs between the Slytherins themselves. Though some of them are quite ordinary, and not as consumed with prejudice and bullying as Malfoy and his crowd.

I'm glad you liked the conversation with the mystery boy! And yes, they just kind of jumped into this strange conversation, but things will be revealed soon enough. I'm glad you liked his choice in books, I definitely approve as well! :) As for his identity, well you'll find out soon enough!

Ah, I'll double-check on the owl front. Thanks for pointing that out, and for another thoughtful review! :D


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