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Review:HarryPotterFan_1 says:
Bonjour, here for the review swap over on the forums.
This is now one of my favourite oneshots, it was absolutely beautiful. I love how you had Bill reminiscing the times when Fleur remembered him and allowed me, as a reader, to explore his thoughts and memories.
The memory of Fleur at Molly's funeral was sweet as Molly and Fleur did not get along well but it was lovely that she was there to support her husband.
Finally, I loved the French phrases. I know that Fleur is French but in many of the Bill/Fleur fanfics I have read, people chose not to include French so I like how you did as it is more realistic - I don't think Fleur would just stop using French after marrying Bill.
Overall, a lovely oneshot. :)
10/10

Author's Response: Hello! :)

Aw, you're making me blush! I'm really happy you liked this story, as it is rather dear to my heart. Knowing you enjoyed Bill's perspective and the slow revelations of memories is great to hear.

I'm really glad you pointed out the funeral scene as well, I actually got quite emotional imagining it! Thank you! :)

I agree, Fleur is French and I think her accent and interjection of French words would be an important part of her. I actually imagine her teaching her children French and speaking it at home, as well.

Thank you so much for this lovely review! :D


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