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Review:patronus_charm says:
This story gets more and more awesome with every tea reference in it. This one was brilliant Ď A good cup of milky tea cheers everything upí. I think thatís one of the best things about reading a story by a British author as they understand the importance of tea in our society unlike authors from other countries!

No they had an argument! I donít really know who to agree with here as theyíre both right and then theyíre both wrong at the same time. Iím leaning more towards Theo as I can imagine that would have a good showdown included with it and thatís always fun to watch! Then thereís Daphneís argument that she didnít actually do anything which is true I guess, but that doesnít mean that theyíre not going to.

I really liked how you portrayed Daphne after the argument as you showed her emotions really well. I guess she still feels a certain level of loyalty to Pansy and co. due to them being her friends but then theyíre doing something wrong. Then thereís the whole confusion over Theo and what she should do with him and you managed to balance it all really well and I didnít get confused at all.

Aw Astoria was so cute when she came back with Draco. I really love how youíre showing their blossoming romance as Iíve always wondered how those two met and fell in love and I never imagined it to be such a spur of the moment thing, but itís really great. I really like seeing how much Astoriaís grown and developed and leaving Adrian really did her wonders if she can now stand up to suspected Death Eaters.

Ah cliff-hanger or what? I never suspected Pansy to have such an evil and menacing side to her and I donít really want to know what she could have done as itís worrying to think about! That was a really great chapter, Bethany, and Iím looking forward to the next ♥

-Kiana

Author's Response: Haha, I'll keep the tea references coming then! I agree, it's fundamental to British society :P

I'm glad that you can see both sides of the argument. Although, like you, I think that Theo's probably in the right, I was hoping that Daphne would sound reasonable too.

I think you've summed up Daphne's emotions perfectly there! I'm very glad that you didn't get confused as this chapter was an absolute nightmare to write, and at several point *I* was getting confused about what was meant to be going on! haha

Oh I'm so glad that you liked Astoria in this chapter. I liked the idea of having it as a spontaneous thing for both of them- the pureblood families don't really seem to do "spontaneous." It's great to hear how you think Astoria's developed as a character!

Sorry- I do like my cliffhangers! :P I'm quite enjoyed contrasting Pansy's simpering, girly side with her scheming, slightly evil one, and I promise all will be revealed in the next chapter...!

Thank you again for such a wonderful review (and I'm sorry I took so long to reply!) It really means a lot. ♥

-Bethany


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