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Review:marauderfan says:
Ok. The best part of this chapter was clearly Malfoy's name for his group. You'd think he could come up with something better! And it's funny how Tor thinks Malfoy is a slimy git, given that she ends up marrying him! ;) I also really like the wizard lullaby.

And regarding your A/N: I wouldn't worry about there not being a lot of plot yet. You're still setting the scene, which understandably takes time as we don't know much about the Slytherins really, since the books are from Harry's pov. So it's nice to get an inside look at how Slytherin house functions before lots of things start happening.

Author's Response: Hello again! I know, how ridiculous is that name! I never really saw him as the witty or creative type, however! I really wanted to avoid the fan fiction habit of making Malfoy into a hunky, sensitive heart-throb overnight: at this point in the HP books he's still a slimy git, as you so perfectly put it, and that extends to his treatment of the other Slytherins! Especially since he wants them to respect him, and they're all quite competitive with each other. And I'm glad you appreciate the lullaby! :P

I'm glad you think the plot is progressing well, that's really reassuring to hear! I enjoy writing the Slytherins, but agree that it's difficult to get the plot flowing without setting the scene first and establishing the characters, especially for me as the writer!

Thank you very much for another thoughtful, lovely review! :D

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