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Review:Calypso says:
Oh wow! Intriguing chapter!

I was interested to see a chapter written from Amelia's point of view, as she was only really mentioned in passing during the last one, and she doesn't seem like an immediately sympathetic character. I'm extremely curious to find out how she knows so much about the magical world (I'm sure it's going to be important to the plot!) plus what she isn't telling Sirius about Lexi and basically you raised a lot of questions that I want to find out answers to with this chapter!

Petunia seemed a lot more likable in this chapter than she ever does in the books and I really liked the inclusion of her- she wasn't someone I was expecting to crop up! And you addressed something here that I think is often skated over in the books- that actually quite a lot of Muggles must know about the magical world. I like how this chapter is sort of set on the border between these two worlds- you show how interesting it can be when one crosses into another!

There were also some wonderful funny moments in this- clueless Muggles in the magical world always make me giggle :P and Amelia's references to Sirius as Dog Girl-Boy were hilarious!

Even though we didn't see a huge amount of them, I liked your characterisation of the Marauders- it was clever that you could tell exactly who each one was, just from Amelia's descriptions of them!

This was very interesting continuation of the story- I can't wait for the next chapter, and to hopefully have some of the questions you've raised explored and answered! ♥

-Bethany

Author's Response: Oooh thanks!

Yep, Amelia does know quite a bit about the magical world, which will be explored further in chapter four. Those questions will eventually be answered... one day :P I wanted to connect her with Petunia, because after all, it's a small world :P And indeed there must be, except no-one really realizes how many do because the International Statute of Secrecy prevents them from telling others so there are rarely "omg, you know too?!" moments :')

Hehehehe, absolutely! And that was made up on a whim, so I'm pleased it's gotten such a positive response! :D

And thank you so much, that kind of comment means a lot to me ♥

The next chapter is being written, so SOON!

-Isobel


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