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Review:marauderfan says:
I'm back again :)

Tor is such an interesting character. I like her, but I don't like her, lol. She picks on everyone, is prejudiced (that's probably much to do with her upbringing) and yet there's something about her that makes her quite relatable. Maybe it's the fact that she has the potential to change, or she acts like any other teenager ("accidentally" forgetting the ugly dress, etc). I don't really know. But she seems like a realistic person and I think she's very intriguing.

The Slytherin boys are funny. I also thought it was hilarious that they were taking Muggle drugs, given the "typical" Slytherin hatred of all things Muggle. But I guess every teenager wants to be a rebel and what better way to do that than with stuff that would make their parents extra furious if they ever found out. ;)

This is a great story so far, I'm really enjoying it!

Author's Response: Oh, how wonderful are you, leaving me all these lovely reviews! :) I'm so happy you're continuing to enjoy the story!

I'm glad you're having all these thoughts about Tor! I really want to make her as realistic as possible, and you're right, she's both malicious and relateable. She does change a lot over the course of the story, however, and I absolutely love writing her and giving different sides to her personality.

I'm glad you liked the boys as well, and you're right, they are quite silly! I wanted to make them seem like normal, rather immature teenage boys, while also having that darker edge and naive ambitions.

Thank you for a wonderful review, I'm very excited you're liking the story and the kind words mean a lot to me! :) Off to respond to the other ones now!


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