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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
Hey, -BookDinosaur- here again! I'd just finished chapter 15, then I check back in my thread and there you were with another request!

I did like this chapter, I think the discussion between Ron and Hermione about the Horcruxes was really good-I loved seing them come up with conclusions without the help of Dumbledore's knowledge or Harry's help.

One thing I spotted, you describe the dog as bemsed, whereas Ron describes it as amused. I think those are two pretty different emotions, so I'd go back and change one of them so they both say the same thing.

I think it was really interesting about the dog-are you going to bring Sirius back?! Gah!

All in all, this was a good chapter that really left me wanting more.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I've changed the dog to being amused.

I am still of two minds about Sirius. On one hand, he was dying as he fell into the Veil. Is it Sirius in his Animagus form because that would be the only form he has left or is it a dog that looks like Padfoot?

Hermione has memorized everything Harry has said, but now they have to interpret what they know. :)

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

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