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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
-BookDinosaur- here again!

I liked this chapter, I've always loved Bill and Fleur, so this chapter was close to my heart. The only thing I would suggest is put more emotions in-I want to know how Bill felt, how Fleur felt, maybe a guest's point of view, just tell us how much Bill and Fleur love each other, or the look on their faces as Fleur walked down the aisle. You could even tell us about how Fleur's dad was feeling!

I really liked your idea of the spell that shows how well matched a pair is, and the fact that Bill and Fleur were so perfect for each other just made me go aww.

I loved the three aunts-they were so catty and Aunt Muriel-like, I was laughing out loud when they trapped Hermione between them.

Anyway, all in all, a great chapter that left wanting to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I've added a note about including more emotions and viewpoints for the wedding.

The three aunts did give Hermione a chance to leave but she just didn't realize it. :)

Thank you for reading and reviewing!


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