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Review:MadiMalfoy says:
Hello again! :)

I so called it! I had a sneaking suspicion that it was Dominique's boss that made her get bitten because of all the popularity and such it would get for the Daily Prophet. She's a mean unfeeling little b! The cliffhanger of the letter only reinforces that characterization.

I see no typos, as you have already fixed those so good job on that! One thing I think you could do is use some more contractions, like "I'm" instead of I am, just to make their speech sound less formal and more casual, like it should be. This chapter flowed very well and I'm excited for the next chapter! :) xx
~MadiMalfoy

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

Haha indeed, it was Dom's boss. What a selfish creature! I am pleased you found her characterisation reinforced through the letter.

I am glad you didn't find any typos. I'll work on the contractions. I am not too good with dialogue so yeah. Thanks again =)


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