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Review:Solo says:
Hello -waves- here for review tag!

First off, I absolutely adore your writing style. It makes me so happy. I love the contrast between how she was and how she is now. The description of Teddy (despite how I dislike how he is to her) just portrays perfectly why she's in love with him, it's so believable and almost understandable why she keeps taking him back even though he's so mean! Which is excellent, kudos to you. I often read 'the other woman' fics and find myself in despair because he has some hold that I never find is aptly described for me to understand why! But I do, which is brilliant.

The ending is just the perfect cliffhanger. Coming from a suspense hater, I adore it. It's the right mix of will-she, won't-she leaving the rest up to the readers imagination without me wanting to scream YOU DIDN'T END IT I WANT TO KNOW and throw my laptop across the room in a rage. So my laptop thanks you.

Favourite quote: 'Like an inept mathematician, I try to subtract the sum of him from my life, to take away the warmth of his skin and the calluses on the tips of his fingers. I try to picture a world without his irregular appearances, without his mocking smile, or his sarcastic remarks.' Just stunning.

You're writing is just absolutely superb, I adore this. Well done!

Author's Response: Hello! *waves back*

Oh my goodness, thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed this! It's just wonderful to hear that Dominique's behaviour seems believeable and understandable, as I was very anxious that she'd come across as sympathetic. I feel so happy that that all works for you! ♥

I'm glad you (and your laptop! :P) liked the ending- especially coming from someone not keen of cliffhangers (I'm starting to think that I have an unhealthy enjoyment of them, haha)

Ooh I'm so glad that you liked that quote! I had fun writing it!

I can't thank you enough for this wonderful review. Thank you so much for all your kind words- It really means a lot! ♥

-Bethany


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