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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
-BookDinosaur- here with your requested review!

I liked this chapter-I'm glad we're getting to see Maddy's point of view of all this. Her little comments were funny, and I enjoyed reading this from her point of view.

Her mother seems like a horrible person already, and I haven't even met her. Those comments about her height and complexion were sad, but realistic-I can imagine her mother saying it, even if it is nasty. Gah, poor Maddy. Now I just want to hug her and tell her she's pretty. Does that seem like too much?

James in this chapter was nice-definitely more mature than in the previous chapter, and he was so sweet to Maddy! Come on Maddy, just agree to go out with him already. You know you want to. And the dream! It was so sweet! Maddy's just in denial.

Personally, I think Maddy's just a bit on the Mary-Sue side, but that's probably just me.

Anyway, I can't think of much CC for this chapter, and I'm enjoying reading and reviewing this story!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like this from Madison's POV, because that's how the rest of this story will be. :) And yes, her mother is definitely not the nicest of people.

James has grown up a bit, and will continue to do so in future chapters. :)

I plan on making a few changes to Madison's character, among other things, in a massive re-write, because she's getting a bit too Mary-Sure for me as well.

Thanks so much for the review, and I'll be sure to re-request soon!

-ShadowRose (Taylor)


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