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Review:potterfan310 says:
I've been wondering when this was going to be updated and I'm so glad it has. The wait was certainly worth it!!!

I LOVE your Marauder's descriptions, they're perfect and there's a really good picture of them been painted in my head. I actualy LOVE them all, even Peter. I mean they are spot on!!!

Haha, poor Remus. Although it sounds like something my friends (but minus the fancying part, we're such anti-social people boys are like another species to us. It'd probably be for some stupid reason) would get me to do, since I guess I'm sort of like Remus in a way.

Oooh I like that Amelia knows Petunia and that Vernon is her boss' son. I like the way you've incorperated them into Amelia's daily life. I'm curious about her being a witch if Lexi was a muggle, but I'm guessing like Lily she's a muggle born? If not, I'm curious about her knowledge about the wizarding world.

Hedgehog-boy and Dog girl-boy and Napkin boy, I love it!!! Amelia definitely has a good way with nicknaming people.

Oh no, Poor Lexi. Poor Sirius. I'm really intrigued about what happend to her and whether she really is dead or whether she's in hiding somewhere.

Can't wair for the next chapter!

11/10

-Potterfan310
Soph x ♥

Author's Response: Yes, sorry! This novella tends to be one of my hardest stories to write, but also one of the most rewarding, if that makes sense? :3

OMG thank you so much for that lovely comment about my Marauders descriptions! I love them so much, even Peter, so it's great to hear I've done them justice here!

Haha, I've done that before (and Remus got off easily, Imo)

Thank you very much! I found myself in a conversation a few months ago where I was chatting to a stranger and then we realized we knew a lot of the same people, despite having never met before. That's kind of what inspired Amelia's connection with Lily, even though they've only spoken to each other for like five minutes of their lives.

Might I point out that Lily's Muggle-born, while Petunia is a Muggle? ;) Also, more about Amelia's knowledge of the wizarding world will be revealed in chapter four :D

I came up with those nicknames on a whim, so I'm pleased that you like them! :P

Poor Sirius, indeed. *hugs Padfoot tightly* Ahhh, you'll just have to read on to find out ;)

I'm writing the next chapter right now, so SOON.

-Isobel ♥


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