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Review:potterfan310 says:
Ooo it's heating up!!

I Love Lily, she's such strong willed and wants things done there and then. I also think it's cute that she's the one protecting her older brother.

Oh god, so awkward. If I was Lily I would be cringing so bad. Totally awkward.

Even though Lily went nuts and then got embarrassed in front of the whole school I'm glad her and Phina bonded, I mean imagine if they were at each others throats. That would so not be good, although it would add a whole new dynamic to the story.

It's good that someone finally knows even if it isn't Al.

Fun fact, I was in placement and one of the little girls names is Seraphina and I just smiled to myself because all I could think of was Phina was this story :)

Can't wait for chapter 4!
10/10

-Potterfan310
Soph :D

P.s what year is Lily in?

Author's Response: Is it just me who can imagine Lily going "How am I a diva? I just want what I want when I want it." Have I gone crazy? Lily is my little ball of sass, she's become my baby (and not just in this fanfiction). We all know that it doesn't matter how young a person is, they can still be fierce and a force to be reckoned with!

My specialty is awkward. If I'd been Lily, I would've been planning Seraphina's death while everything just got extremely awkward.

Can you imagine if Lily and Seraphina were arguing while they were watching the baby. They'd be using the baby as the speaker and yelling insults at each other.

Oh my gosh, that is awesome! Isn't it just awesome when you come across someone who has the same name as a character in a story that you're reading.

Well, Phina and Albus are both in seventh year so that would make Lily a fifth year! Thanks for reviewing!


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