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Review:CassiePotter says:
I really loved this chapter! Helga's character just grows on me more and more with every chapter I read! I love the way that you've written her, because she has the qualities that are associated with Hufflepuff house, but there's also a sassy, witty side of her, too! She and Salazar make quite the pair, and something you do really well with their conversations is show how similar they really are. At first glance, they seem like total opposites, but they have more in common than someone might think!
The shapeshifter also has me intrigued! I want to know what it really is, and why it scares Salazar so much! I have a feeling that they have no idea what they're getting into trying to go after if again!
And I love that you're introducing the Hogwarts we know from JKR through Rowena's planning! You've done such a good job weaving in little details like that, and I think we're getting a wonderful sense of who the four founders are as people.
This is a fantastic story, and I will definitely be reading more and adding it to my favorites! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hey thanks! I like this chapter a lot too...it was fun to bring Rowena and Elaine into the mix. And I'm glad you're liking the Salazar/Helga moments so far! They are more compatible than they seem at first, and I'm so glad that's coming through for you.

The shapeshifter will be explained in more detail in coming chapters. It definitely becomes a challenge! And I'm glad you liked the mention of the blueprints. I'm working on my descriptive skills, and knowing when to add little things like that. Writing this story has been such a learning experience :)

Thank you so much, again! I'm so honored that you're enjoying the story so far!

--Maggie


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