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Review:marauderfan says:
This chapter was really good. I wonder what's going on with Siobhan. I think she's my favourite of the side characters.

I think the best thing about this chapter was the way you've described the fracturing of the big group into smaller factions, and Molly feeling as if she is on the outside. That was a feeling I could totally relate to - as people prepare to leave, they stick together with the ones they're closest to, and I distinctly remember that happening to me at the end of high school and university. Your characters and their feelings/thoughts are so realistic.

Author's Response: Siobhan's subplot will come out more in future chapters.

I remember the breaking up of a group into smaller parts at the end of school - I think it's pretty common, when you know you're going your own way. And teenagers feeling like they don't quite fit is pretty common too. Heck I haven't been a teenager in a long time and I still feel that way sometimes. *sigh* Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it!

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