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Review:Lululuna says:
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Aw, this was so sweet, and I'm always excited to read about Astoria. I really like how you portrayed her here, and I'm surprised that I didn't catch on she'd be a Hufflepuff earlier on. It's so unexpected, especially since she ends up with Malfoy, but very fitting to shake things up that she becomes a Hufflepuff. I loved how caring she was, helping the scared little girl out of the boat and reassuring her, and sparing some compassion for Draco, which was also a great nod towards the future. What a lovely little girl she was!

I think you gave a little credit and painted Hufflepuff in a positive light. Astoria isn't a 'Puff because she's unsuitable for anywhere else, but because she possesses the wonderful attributes which make Hufflepuffs special.

Great job, again! This collection is so sweet, and I like the original spin you put on it! It's interesting comparing Astoria's sorting to Narcissa's sorting, and how different they both are! :)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a ton for reading and reviewing.

I am pleased you liked my version of Astoria, and my sorting of her. I am glad you find it fitting. Yeah I wanted to show Hufflepuff in a positive light and highlight her Puff features before sorting her =)

Thanks again for your lovely review, and I am pleased you liked the way I did things.


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