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Review:Lululuna says:
Okay, I was really concerned at the beginning here! I was terrified for a few moments that the Killing Curse had hit one of the Weasleys, or even Dean... happily, they were all alright! But poor Seyrod, I really liked him too, and he died heroically, even if everyone was a little nonchalant about his death considering everything else going on! I might have liked to see a little followup about him: did he have a funeral? A family? :(

I think that if the boys are going to be good Aurors, they really need to learn and put their personal relationships aside for the sake of protecting others. It's hard, and they're still young and probably quite traumatized from the war, but being an Auror is about more than saving their loved ones. For some reason I feel that Harry understands this a little better than Ron, however. :P

I think you do very well with action scenes, personally! :) The buildup about what happened to Hermione was very suspenseful, and I was convinced she'd have been badly injured! Teddy's birthday party was very sweet, and it was nice to everyone together once again. I still really enjoy Harry in the godfather role, it's different but very sweet! :)

I really enjoyed the banter between the characters, like Ron noticing that Fleur has changed was really funny and very typical of the least-subtle Weasley. :P I liked the transition of the letter from Gwenog Jones- hooray for Ginny! :) Another amazing chapter, really!

Author's Response: You're so right about Seyrod. I wanted to include something more about him, like his background etc, but I couldn't quite fit it into this chapter or the next one! However, I'll try to work on it a bit more, because you're right, it would make it better!

Yes, they need to learn how to put their own feelings aside, and I think they'll get better as they grow older and learn more. You're right - Ron probably follows his emotions more than he does reason, but they're only around 19, and they'll get better at it :)

Wow, what a relief to hear that you think I've done well with the action! I'm also glad you liked Teddy's birthday party. Harry still feels a little awkward around Teddy, haha :)

Thank you again for these absolutely wonderful and helpful reviews, and just know that I appreciate them SO MUCH. You're so lovely for doing this, and I hope you realise how happy it makes me!!

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