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Review:AlexFan says:
I read this entire thing a while ago but I can finally review this chapter now!

Albus is so mean, he comes off as quite abusive and he sounds even worse than Percy did in the books! He writes like he's forty and from a different century and I can't believe that I only realised now how much of a jerk that Albus kind of was!

That being said, the way that he got angry when Melinda broke up with him and snapped at his friends kind of showed that as much as he disliked Melinda, he was still sad to lose something/

Or maybe I'm just being overly romantic and my cynical side is still asleep.

I can't believe that Albus was so rude to Melinda about the flower though. Yeah, you have to be honest in a relationship but there's a difference between being honest and just being rude. Plus, it's not like it's that big of a deal, she's just wearing a flower in her hair.

I love that you showed this from Albus' point of view though. There are very few times when there are explanations for why Albus acts like a jerk and I liked that there was an actual reason for this.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing my story! :)

Albus is really mean and kind of old-fashioned, but as much as he tries to hide his feelings, he is really sad when Melinda breaks up with him. My best explanation for his behavior is that he changed over the years, and he didn't want to admit it, so when Melinda forced him to admit change (by breaking up with him), his emotions were upended.

It's okay to be romantic sometimes. :)

I think that Albus was mean about the flower because he felt like he needed to control some aspect of his relationship, even as he felt it crumbling around him.

Thank you for your review!! :)


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