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Review:Harveyboy says:
Wow! Fantastic twist at the end.

I understand the Adam and Eve part with the apple completely and I think it was a wonderful part of your story. You have great imagination and everything is so original and so emotional...I hope you have written a happy ending...must read on...

Author's Response: Harveyboy,
Oh, I did love writing that twist. That was really fun and I'm so glad that you enjoyed that part. :D

Oh, the Adam and Eve bit... although I agree with her that he very well could've been the snake. :) Everthing was so 'heavy' and they needed a bit of lighthearted time together.

As you already know, I enjoy writing emotional stories, so thank you so very much for commenting about that.

I'm so glad that you are enjoying this one as I had fun writing it.

Thank you,
Dark Whisper

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