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Review:Lululuna says:
Aw, a shout-out?! You are so sweet, and it's of course a pleasure to review your story! :D

I really liked this chapter and how well it flowed off the last one, and I'm very curious as to what exactly Daphne did under Pansy's influence! Daphne is just growing as a character and becoming more confusing (in a good, deep way): she's such an intrinsically good person and recognizes her faults, but knows she can't prevent herself from having said faults. I feel quite bad for her, but I think she's stronger than she gives herself credit for. :)

The fight with Theo was... frustrating. I think Theo's right, that Pansy should be reported and stopped, although she was very confident and so I'm concerned she's holding something over people's heads or has some special punishment and evasion planned out for anyone who opposes her. So I hope Theo's careful, and I don't blame Daphne for being nervous and conflicted about reporting her best friend.

Astoria is great, as always. I think she and Draco would make such an amusing couple, with her being flighty and passionate and him being dry and depressing: can't wait to see more of them! :) I also really liked Astoria's reasoning about why the current government is fine: nobody gets hurt, and that, not power, is what matters.

Looking forward to the next chapter! :D

Author's Response: Aww well it's been a pleasure to get all your wonderful reviews! ♥

I'm so glad that you liked this chapter, and that you're curious about Daphne and Pansy (all will be revealed in the next chapter, I promise!) You have no idea how happy it makes me that you like Daphne's development as a character- I think you've summed her up perfectly in your first paragraph there, to be honest!

I'm very glad that you liked Daphne and Theo's fight! This chapter- especially that bit- was a complete nightmare to write! Like you, I think Theo's in the right, but I'm glad that you can see Daphne's side as well!

Ahaha yes- hopefully it'll be opposites attract for Astoria and Draco? It's great that you're continuing to enjoy her, and that you like her political views. I imagined that there'd be a lot of people post-Voldemort with a similar outlook...

Thank you again for this, and all your other reviews! They make me so happy :) Next chapter should be up soon!

-Bethany


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