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Review:Holly_Mist says:
Hello :)

I really like the entire set up here! It's quite a different beginning! I really like all the characters, especially Albus! Although, i was a bit confused about who Malcolm Wood was, i mean you suddenly brought him into the story! Sorry about that!

Another issue is the spacing between the lines, it gets quite annoying to read because i have continuously keep scrolling! I think you're using the microsoft paste button, i suggest you use the one next to that which says: Paste as plain text. That should reduce the space in-between!

All in all, this story has a lot of potential and i do hope you continue :)

Author's Response: Hi! :)

Can I start off my saying I am a huge fan of your story P&P? It's brilliant and I am so flattered you would spend your time reviewing. I was hoping for a different beginning because I felt like a lot of plots were overused so I tried to go for a new route. Albus I think is going to be one of my favorite people to write. He has that genuine nice quality to him that I like that'll be a big contrast to some latter characters. Don't apologize at all that's my fault! I am writing another story ( Louis.Oc) that I'll be posting soon where I use Malcolm Wood again and I believe I might have just gotten confused and thought I had introduced him when I hadn't. He was meant more as a side comment but I'll keep what you said in mind when introducing future characters and such.

Please don't get me started with the spacing it's horrid! I totally agree with you. I am using that button so I'll use the other one for the next chapter I put to get validated. I was having trouble before when HPFF was saying I need more space in between so I think my text just go all screwed up.

Thank you so much for such a thoughtful response and I will be continuing it so look for the next chapter!

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