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Review:house elf says:
So, okay. That was probably one of the cutest, loveliest chapters I've ever read (and I've read Clash! ;-) )

By reading this story in one sitting (it's I can clearly see how much your writing has improved! It's really wonderful, even though it was already very good to start with :D

Also, Scorpius's 'you bewitch me' made me smile, cus it reminded me of the awesome Mr Darcy's 'you have bewitched me, body and soul' line hehehe ;)

So, yes. Thanks for this lovely chapter :)

Author's Response: So, you rock basically. Thank you for taking the time to read, and to even leave reviews. It means a lot to me.

I love that you think I've improved. Every time I reread the first few chapters of this story, up until about chapter 9ish, I wince and change several things. That might be my perfectionist tendancies though - I probably won't ever be completely happy with the way some things are written. It's also a lot easier to write now that I know my characters and I know a bit more about my own style.

Okay sorry about the essay. Haha I might have unintentionally liberated that line from Pride and Prejudice! I love it so much!

Thank you again for taking the time to read my little story! I hope you have a rad day :))

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