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Review:house elf says:
w-o-w dude, you've got me hooked and it's only chapter 1 :p

Your writing flows really well and I thought the beach scene seemed really vivid. Hugo's an immature little twerp. Rose's friends seem lovely, though.

Excited to read on!

Author's Response: Really?? Wow, thanks!! The first chapter is so important to a story, and I think I must have edited and rewritten this one over and over again.. in fact, there's another version going through validation right now :P

Haha I love your description of Hugo, very spot on. Unfortunately, he doesn't develop mentally until about halfway through. But what are brothers for, right?

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