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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey there! I was so happy to see you updated xD And OMG I got a mention in your author's note? Thanks honey! I do love your story so much =)

This chapter has me smiling so big. Helga's happiness is infectious! I loved the way things played out. It was great how Salazar is becoming more tolerant towards muggles now, agreeing to teach Mary, and even greeting Elaine! I just want to punch the air with a whoop xD

I loved all the romance between Salazar and Helga, you remained true to their characters and yet unfolded different sides to them which I enjoyed. The part about Godric and Helga was awesome and Godric's comment made me giggle.

Your writing style and descriptions were perfect as always too. Some dialogues were simply superb, like in the interaction between Salazar/Helga in the kitchen. The 'stealing moments' in 'dark corners' had me grinning and I could just imagine the thing in my head - Salazar and Helga make my heart beat fast, haha. I do love them so much, they make a perfect couple.

I am so excited for this story, it's really going great! Please keep writing! Superb job as always xD

10/10
Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

P.S. I am the first to review this chapter, woohoo!

Author's Response: Yay, my first chapter 8 reviewer! Of course you get a shout out, AD...I'm just incredibly grateful for all the time you put into reviewing :)

Aww, I'm glad you liked the fluffy romance in this chapter! I wanted readers to get a chance to see how Helga and Salazar would work as a couple, and I just think they would be really precious together. And they also have important things to learn from each other. Basically I wanted to show them at their best moments :)

Godric is kind of a man-child sometimes, haha. He loves to tease Helga, but what are big brothers for? It was great to get a chance to write their friendship again.

I definitely plan in continuing this soon--hopefully my updates will get faster now that it's summer. I'm just over the moon about this review, AD! Thank you for taking the time...I love getting random reviews and they're so rare for me :) So glad you still like Helgazar, and I'll definitely let you know when their story continues :)

--Maggie


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