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Review:Jchrissy says:
I can't believe I'm at the very end! Boo!! Well at least this means I can start another one of yours.

Ugh. Where to start?!

You've grown so much over the course of this story, Courtney. Getting to read the new chapters and read how much your writing improves over each one was such an awesome experience. You wrote an insanely compelling and addicting story while continuing to push your talent and improve it, and I just think that's awesome.

I got so attached to all of your characters. Even Tori. I find myself liking her a little more knowing what she did -- I"m not sure why. She lived in this bright shiny sort of world where she glowed everywhere she went, but in reality she was in this terrible cold and numb place where she wouldn't let anyone really reach out and help her. I think that is so damn sad. But I also think you crafted the perfect character for the role. She was beautiful and breathtaking but insanely detached form reality, until her reality became too much.

And Charlie! She was such an awesome OC to spend time with. Her combination of naive nature and sarcasm, and the fact that she really is just adorable and funny, sometimes annoying, just made her feel very realistic. Watching her and James learn to be together was really exciting, and this last chapter was such an emotional way to end it all.

I love that she didn't feel okay about the funeral and that it caused some issues, but even more than that, I love you fixed those and ended us on a positive note.

This story was so much fun to slip into, Courtney, and I hope you're so proud of yourself for it!

Author's Response: I'm so, so glad you think my writing improved! When I first started writing fanfiction last year, I just regarded it as a bit of a fun time waster - something to do when I was bored during the holidays. I never realized how much I would learn from it!

I actually really enjoyed writing Tori's chapters, probably more so than Charlie's. It was definitely enjoyable to write about a generally cruel, unkind, mean girl with a mysterious past who met her ultimate downfall. Dun, dun, dun!

Sorry. I felt like the words 'ultimate downfall' needed a dun, dun, dun after them.

I'm really glad that you liked Charlie (and this story) and it made me unbelievably happy to see a review from you each chapter!

Thank you!


PS: I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter of Before They Fall. Gasp!

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