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Review:Pheonix Potioneer says:
Nothing like a nice, relaxing, day in Diagon Alley, talking about werewolves.

I don't like people who put nasty things in newspapers. If you don't have anything good to say, don't say it at all.

Rose is the perfect little role model. Poor Hugo. I really doubt Rose will stay like that the entire series, though!

I wish we learned more about what Albus did at Derek's house. All we really know is that he watched T.V. I bet Albus was pretty surprised by that!

I'm actually quite surprised that Rose hasn't figured out, or at least become suspicious of Angie. I'm not sure what's up with her yet, but I am certain that Angie is a good person. She seems too nice.

Something with Angie is reminding me of something with one of my characters. Weird coincidence.

I sure hope Albus makes the team, now that he's got a broomstick! There is a lot of pressure on him now.

I really like the Believin' Bubbles. You come up with very creative ideas for wizarding products.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: The first line of your review amused me. I thought you were going to say it was nice to see a more relaxing chapter, because most of what happens in this chapter is just for fun, although it does introduce some characters and stuff, and then you commented on the werewolves.

The Daily Prophet can be particularly nasty, can't it? Rather more like one of the more sensational tabloids than a respected national publication.

Yeah, I wanted to bring in more about Albus's time at Derek's but there wasn't really time for them to discuss everything and some of the other stuff was more important. It might come up again when they get on the Hogwarts Express.

Now, I want to know what about Angie reminds you of one of your characters. Weird the coincidences that happen between fics sometimes. Gyffin_Duck's story, as you probably know, also has a new Potions teacher, although in her characters' fifth year, rather than their second.

Albus will try out for the Ravenclaw team, but there might be a few Quidditch surprises this year. I've a feeling there's something people won't expect.

Glad you liked the Believin' Bubbles. They just came to me one night a while ago and I had to add them in.


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