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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
-BookDinosaur- here again with your requested review!

The winner of the Most Insightful Reviewer diadem told me my review was really helpful?! I think my face looked something like this:0_o. And then it changed to :D.

Ahem. Anyway. I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Your descriptions of the market was really good, I've never been to Egypt, but I could really see it in my mind. I do live in the desert though, so I can tell you the description of it was perfect. Also, I really liked your description of the heat-that's exactly how I feel in the summer.

I also liked how Rose thought that Scorp was a silly tourist, the irony there was good, but really it just amused me.

I feel your characterisation of Rose is just getting better all the time, I especially liked that little detail about the stray cats she befriended. And how she felt bad for saying no to the shopkeeper, even though he was really pushy. Essentially, it's all those little details that make a character come alive in your mind.

...wow. That was deep (for me, anyway). Anyway, overall this was a really great chapter that made me want to read more.

Author's Response: Haha, I didn't realise myself that my reviews were insightful, but if that's what the public say :P

I'm so glad that you liked the descriptions and that you could envisage Egypt as I used to be terrible at it and leave it out all together! I'm glad that you could relate to the heat, because living in England I'm not that used to it :P

Haha, I loved including that as I thought it would be a fun way to introduce him so I'm so glad that you like him too :D

Yeah, the stray cats idea kind of came from my own personality and I thought it would be fun to include! I'm so glad that she's coming alive as I would hate for her to be like a Mary-Sue!

Thank you for this lovely review and it's really spurned me on to finish the next chapter!

-Kiana


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