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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here for review tag. I am glad I came over to read this chapter, I am enjoying your writing very much!

This chapter was indeed very well written. I think you expressed Flitwick's pain amazingly. The attachment he felt towards the children, the part about Grace, the part where he's visiting the graves of the fallen, and the ending of Hermione coming up to him was all so well done. My heart was literally clenching at reading this entire thing, it was oh so sad, and yet I liked how the ending was hopeful. Your descriptions were simply amazing and drew me in, and you had some beautiful imagery.

Apart from a few grammar errors here and there, this was perfect and I loved it. Great job!

10/10
Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hello again! :) Great to see you back at this story.

I'm so happy you enjoyed this chapter, it seems to be most people's favourites out of the whole collection which is very lovely. I loved writing Flitwick and imagining how he would react to the situation. Hearing that your heart was clenching is just such wonderful praise! :)

Thank you so much for this very lovely review! :D


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