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Review:celestialbattlefield says:
The way you have depicted malfoy was interesting, youve humanised him and given him a history rather than skimming his character of his selfishness and arrogance. It good to see him as a person with good and bad traits. The opening was amazing, i lovedd the gothic feel and the connotations of the portrait, was that latin ??
And absolutely enjoy seeing hogwarts through his eyes and his undying love for Hermione =). Maybe you could add a Ron,hermione draco love triangle or a tragic ending.
keep it up

Author's Response: celestialbattlefield,

Well, first, thank you for finding my story and taking a chance on it. It is so much appreciated. :)

I do love Draco... all the good and bad that he is, but in this story, I do try to dig deep into his feelings on many things. He has his struggles with what is right and wrong and learns that that world view of things conflicts with his heart on many levels.

I'm really glad that you liked the gothic feel of things... the witch and her dragon. Yes, that was Latin. Many things in the magical world are derived from that beautiful language and I use it a tiny bit.

Well, if you love reading of his undying love for Hermione, you have come to the right story. These two come together in a variety of ways and places and have their heated time together, enjoying each other, but their sad reality looms overhead... they should not be together.

Ron is certainly involved a bit, but his focus is more on Lavender Brown until later in the story. ;)

This story is full of tragic themes. It is sad. There is plenty of love between them and Dramione action in droves. I promise!

I do hope that you keep reading. This Christmas section is but a tiny piece of this novel. I'd love to hear from you, especially when they come together.

I wanted to give him a REAL reason to fall in love with her and a REAL reason for her to fall in love with him. I set out for this to be believable, romantic, and tragic.

Thanks so much for commenting and reviewing.
Much appreciated...
Dark Whisper

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