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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
Here for Team Blue in the Ravenclaw Review Battle!

I enjoyed the build up to revealing Lucy, as I thought that Lysander was pushing Lorcan in with Cassiopeia, and also, the boggarts-I thought that it would be Cass as well. I seem to be seeing Cass everywhere. :)

I loved how Lucy was so scary and 'evil'-in most stories I've read, she's the sweet younger sister, so it was a nice change to see her portrayed like this. Also, I found all the use of italics while she was putting psychoanalysts down really funny, I was laughing out loud at that point.

I also loved reading more Lysander at the end-I love him, I think he's my favourite character because he's just so cheerful and positive and irrepressible, I find myself laughing out loud at him.

Anyway, a really good chapter that left me wanting more.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing the second chapter! :)

I seem to have confused a few people with the introduction of Lucy instead of Cassiopeia. I didn't even mean to do that, but I'm glad it makes for a nice build-up. I think that my greatest hope for this story is now to get people seeing Cassiopeia, and then to confuse them when it's not. I'm glad it worked for you. :)

For this story, I really wanted a different character, done in a different manner, and I settled upon Lucy for some reason. I pumped her blood with sarcasm and made her a hopeless cynic. She was really fun to write.

I'm glad that you like Lysander. He reminds me of a cuddly bunny rabbit! :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~UnluckyStar57


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