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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
I'm here for the Blue vs. Bronze Review Battle!

... Wow. This story was amazing! Even though it wasn't a long novel or even a very lengthy one-shot, you managed to capture just the right amount of emotion and raw feeling that Remus and Sirius shared (and some that they didn't share).

I'm not really a big reader of slash, especially if I know that it's going to be some kind of overblown scene, but this was NOT like that. It seemed as though Sirius and Remus, instead of defining themselves in each other, defined themselves by their own experiences. And then, they became each other's greatest comfort. That's something that should happen in ANY relationship, but all too often, it does not. Their love was very real in this story, and very painful, even when they laughed at themselves. ("You don't even like girls.") Everything just kept piling up, adding to the dynamics of the relationship.

I like how Remus was the cartographer, the steady one, who saw rigid lines and corners, and Sirius was the traveller, complementing Remus' angles with uncertain rooms and changing situations. The way you incorporated the Marauders' Map and the map of Grimmauld Place into the facts of their story was really incredible. It further juxtaposed Remus' steadfastness and Sirius' wanderlust, giving all the more reason why they are absolutely perfect for each other.

This was a really tremendous work. I really, really enjoyed reading it because of all the elements that you blended so perfectly. My only question is:

This is your most recent work, and it was written in September of last year. When will you be gracing HPFF with more of your brilliant stories?

I'm sure you have so many more to tell. :)


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