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Review:Serendipity1234 says:
Great chapter! Honestly I'm surprised the night with Ian didn't make Ava even more crazy, but I guess that's the closure she needed. His mom is really a piece of work. I kind of wish Ava had a dramatic falling out with her and punched her in the face haha!
I'm really curious to learn more about Ava's past. Clearly she's had it hard, and things are especially bad now. It's depressing but I like her a lot. Despite all the crying lately, I think she's pretty strong and I like strong characters.
I really want to know why she doesn't have a wizarding job more than anything though. How could she leave all that behind? Though she does use magic. Did she really have no friends at Hogwarts? Or did they just go there separate ways or something? She doesn't seem like the friendless loner type, I don't think.
While I feel bad for Ava (who could not?) I think more about Louis. Maybe it's because he does have so much, like she said, and it's awful that he's still not really happy, I don't think. And Ava calling him Ian all the time when all he wants to do is be there for her and whatnot...he's like a sad puppy. We can't have sad puppies.
But I am so happy that he told her he hates when she calls him Ian! Maybe now she will really endeavor to NOT. And she's starting to see the differences between them more than the similarities. This is progress! Slow, but sure. She's going to be just fine, I think. She freaks out and thinks she can't do it anymore, but she always keeps trudging on because even though everything sucks, she can handle it.
Yeah. Update soon!! I really do like this story a lot :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Well, it sort of did make her a little bit crazier, but overall it was good for her as far as closure goes. Nahhh Ava would never do that ;) She's far too polite and well-mannered to do such a thing, haha.
YES. Ava's mysterious past. You'll be finding about it very soon, but I will tell you that things have never been easy for her. And you're right, she is strong, as you'll see.
You will also be finding that out shortly, so yeah, not gonna say anything about that. This isn't a very good review response, but I don't want to give anything away :P
Ahhh, right you are, young one. He's not happy. At all. And it is sad because he does have so much, but none of it really matters to him. Also, we must never have sad puppies. Therefore I find it necessary to cheer him up in the next few chapters.
Yes! It's progress! She's definitely going to start paying better attention after he's said that; she's not some heartless shrew who's going to hurt him on purpose. She'll be okay in the end. She's strong, determined, and has a fiery personality to match. She'll be just fine.
Thanks so much for the lovely review ♥ The next chapter is in the queue!


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