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Review:800 words of heaven says:

I thought I'd give your incredibly long and by the looks of it, well-written Jily fic a shot, but then I saw this, and I couldn't resist! It's hard to say no to Oliver Wood!

I really like the way you've depicted him here. He's older, and more mature, and knows what he wants from life. Obviously, his past haunts him, still, but he seems to be more balanced because of it, rather than down-right depressed.

Aidan was adorable. We didn't see much of Mia, but I'm looking forward to getting to know her a bit better of the course of the next few chapters!

This is such a wonderful start, to what could be a wonderful story!

Author's Response: Hi there :)!!

Awww haha well I can't say I'd have been disappointed if you'd have started that, but I'm even more excited that you chose this. It's still so new to me that any feedback I can get is really appreciated.

I like what you said about Oliver being more balanced because of it. That's what I want -- to show that though the war impacted him and everyone, it didn't ruin him. If anything it gave him a good sense of the importance of maintaining relationships and leaning on your friends and family.

The next chapter is a Mia and Aidan on, so if we end up running into one another again through tag I'll be excited to see what you think of them :)!

Thank you so much for your lovely compliments!

♥ Jami

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