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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hi! I'm here for the B v. B review battle!!

What a sad piece I picked to read!! I felt really sorry for Remus, who, it seems, cannot bear the pain of losing all of his friends with one fell swoop. It was brilliant the way you connected all of that, and manifested the bad feeling into the only "whole" character left of the bunch.

But he isn't whole, not really. He's been scarred, marked already by what he became, and cut deeper with the hardships of war. He feels set apart from the solemn, yet innocent churchgoers, but he wants to do as they do, to feel as they feel: That it was a sad event, but to feel no great heartache. He cannot. He is forever an outcast.

You juxtaposed the two--Remus and churchgoers--quite perfectly. And, even though it was a whole bunch of sadness, I'm very glad that he decided not to let his grief kill him.

The only CC I have is that sometimes your pronouns were a bit unclear. Otherwise, this was the perfect, heartbreakingly-saddest story.

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: Hi there UnluckyStar57 :D

I'm glad that you found it sad as that was the point of the story, even if I do feel a little evil about it. I'm so glad that you liked how I brought it all together as I think that's the saddest thing about him.

I'm really glad that you got that he was never really whole as I feel as soon as Greyback bit him he was different and he never really got over that fact.

I really loved that juxtaposing it was a lot of fun to do even if I did feel a little evil when doing it. I think the grief always left a big mark on him, and he never recovered from it but he would never allow it to kill him.

I'll go and review those, so thanks for that! Thank you for this wonderful review ♥

-Kiana


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