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Review:PitchBlue says:
Oh my god, I'm so excited. Gaaah I love this chapter! I love narky drunk Remus, and oh my, you wrote him sexy! I really believe that when Remus suffers from some emotional conflict (more than he normally does, that is) he really goes to extreme measures to deal with it, like when in OotP he was thinking about leaving Tonks and everything, so I thought his reactions in this chapter were very realistic. I can imagine it must've been hilarious to write.

Loved how Gemma and Remus became friends, it fitted their characters very nicely. I like it that you're letting them trust each other, poor Remus needs it.

This might be my favourite chapter so far. But I'll probably say that about every new chapter you post just because I'm so excited.

Hmm I'm starting to embarass myself. I mean, *cue cool devil-may-care voice* it's not as if I check your author's page multiple times a day to see if you've posted.

Nah, you've got me, I do. There, I've said it.

Can't wait for your next chapter as usual, but take all the time you need! I'm sure it'll be brilliant!

- Laura

Author's Response: Yay! Somehow I knew you would love this chapter XD

It seems that drunk Remus is a hit with my readers so I'm going to bring him out as often as I can :D And yes, he totally hides behind his illness because he thinks it will be better for all those involved ... which is why I knew I needed to have Gemma reach out to him. She's seen all his past memories but she's also a little bit different so I thought he'd listen to her. Hurray for friendship and bonding!!

This chapter was supposed to come out days ago but I screwed up and forgot to put the creator of Soul Train in my disclaimer so it took a bit longer to validate. So I'm already done with 1/2 of the next chapter, but it's a big altogether one, so half means that I still have about 2500 words to go. But it's mostly a Remus/Marianne centered chapter so I know you're going to love it. Well maybe not, considering how the plot goes.


Thanks for your review!!!


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