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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello again! :)

I really like the flashback-present cycle of the story thus far. I think throwing the reader right into the action at the beginning was very effective, and there's a really strong balance how of context and tense progress. I love how the characters make no excuses: they are the way they are, and the reason they're that way is explained in bits and pieces.

Poor Camille! The story of their breakup makes a lot of sense, and would be very hard for both of them. I wonder if Camille would have done the same for Xavier had it been her? The way he ended things with her was so heartbreaking, I don't blame her for resenting him. They were very sweet together in the tree, and poor Camille, having to see her former lover wounded like that! :(

I'm curious about Astrid, and what happened to Apolline. I thought about the dates, and since Fleur's mother was called Apolline, maybe Astrid named her daughter after her dead sister, and is therefore Fleur's future grandmother? I really like Astrid, and I think she'd be a fitting ancestor to our lovely Delacour. :)

Another great chapter, I can't wait for the next update! :)

Author's Response: Hi!

Oh, I'm so happy you like the flashbacks! I might not keep them all the time though, because sometimes they just seem awkward and out of place...

The characters don't make any excuses because they can't afford to, I think. They all know their lives are at stake, so they might as well be as true to themselves as they can. (I'm not entirely sure, to be honest, sometimes they do things without my approval.)

UGH, THOSE TWO. Camille would probably have done the same thing to protect Xavier -- it's one of traits they share that makes them work together.

Yes, you're right about Astrid naming her daughter after her dead sister! Fleur must have gotten her combative will from somewhere, so why not her grandmother?

Thank you so much for another fabulous reveiw! :)


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